Thursday, August 18, 2005

The fun I had-1

Today I was late for my class at 9.30 am again. Though I took all the necessary preventive measures. I went to bed 1.30 am and set a computer alarm of 8 am. So I was sure that I wont be late but I was …..because last night I had a weird dream. My friends know that I do remember many of my dreams and they all are now scared of my dreams. When I tell them I saw a dream last night they ran away thinking that again I am going to tell one. 

So last night I was dreaming and when my alarm rings, I switched my speaker off again went back to sleep so that I can complete my dream. As usual it was weird dream and I don’t remember it completely either. It started at a railway platform where I met some old friend of mine and he told me that he is now reading at IITM. There were some girls seating on the benches there on the platform, wearing some strange combination of colored dresses. Some were wearing all blue some all red …and same colored girls were seating together. Then on train everything was normal except my birthday celebration in train. There was a cake too. Then something something happens. Then I remember entering into a palace …something something happens and then there was a rebellion like thing in the palace. People were fighting and some people were playing football in the field too and it was raining too. I got too confused and I got up. But it was already 9.25 am. Some part of the dream was withheld because of its sensitive nature. Well this was not the main part of the blog. Some friends suggested me that I can write about some incidents of my life. I kinda liked this idea. So here is account in which I had the fun.

A and K were good friends and where worried about their performance in the exams. So they made a pact and signed a bond each that they will secure 80% marks. They decided the bet too and kept one copy (signed by other) with them. As usual they only made the planning and after exams they were worried. K was in no mood for fulfilling the bet and he told B (room-mate of A) to steal that paper from A for him. B found this interesting and agreed to do so. A was having some hint about this so he always kept that paper under lock. B was able to get it somehow and gave it to K. K was very happy. He told B that B was his real good friend. After sometime B starts feeling guilty that he betrayed A. He was now thinking of snitching K’s paper for A. Getting paper from K was difficult. His room was in different block. But B got the paper on the final day. Same thing happened when B gave K’s paper to A. A told him that he is his real good friend. In the evening A B and K were having snacks together and suddenly K started saying about that bet. At that B realized that both don’t know that their own papers are missing. And considering the situation B tried to get away from there. But both K and A stopped him saying that they wont tell how they get the papers. After a small stud speech and grinning both take out the papers. B has to confess…there was no way out. Both A and K, who were so pleased with B till then, were now totally angry. Ok B was me. But I don’t know why they were mad at me. I did what they wanted me to do. I still don’t get it. A and K were (still are) my good friends, so definitely I cant betray one and I had no intention of hurting anyone. A and K stopped talking with me for some days and I had to say them (both) sorry like 100 times.

But I had my fun on that evening.

23 comments:

KRITIK4u said...

HI voice,

As your eternal critic,friend philosopher and guide I bestow upon you my constructive criticisms once more ;).

You have to improve the starting of your blog and make it more cotton candy in appearance. I believe the starting is where u grab the reader by the scruff of the neck and only release him after the ending.

Your story content is usually pretty good so no probs there *thumbs up*.

Your dream was like looking through a kaleidoscope, colourful, mysterious and charming.(mangekyou sharingan lol)

Well I have to admit I didn't quite get the life incident that you wrote in your second part of the blog. Some portions were ambiguous for me. Maybe you or some other fellow comment writers will apprise me of the complete picture in the second part.

I will be back with more comments criticisms ... so watch out.. :)

saurabh ( suru ) said...

wats this man!!!
A B n K n C...
i m too confused n i dont wana read it to stress my mind..
the dream part was gud n being ur one of the friends with whom u share ur dreams.. i felt u shud not hav compromised with the story..u cud hav told it may be in a figurative sense.. yeah i wish i cud also remember my dreams!!!!
best of luck..

Morph said...

Your dreams seem to create a parallel world more mysterious and charming than the real one. Are A and K characters from real life ?
Maybe u r one of the few persons who can recollect their dreams so vividly....

I felt the opening lines of your blog a tad boring. Maybe u can improve on that count.

samiranghosh said...

Good to see you that you still do have the habit of chasing people may be this time with your dreams.Carry on with your blogs and keep posting.
Cheers!

Voice said...

@hi kritik

thnx for the constructive criticism. it was soo generous and kind of u too spare so much time and words for me.
i will try to make my starting better.

@kritik an suru
yups i think i makhaued in the story.

@morph
yes. dream world is like parallel world for me. i experiment things and share experiences from it. yes i will try to improve . only if i can...

@samiran
chasing with dreams...wat was my ealier excuse of chasing people ;)
so far this was the only one.
keep commenting

Nimesh said...

achha hai badhiya hai, likho, aur likho!

Phoenix said...

Wah...chalo kisi aur ko bhi wierd sapne aate hain, meri tarah:P

aur jahan tak tumhari aur tumhare frnds ki baat hai, i dont think their was somethin wrong in wat u did[:P]

but nt much right either...but anyway, why care, frnds mein chalta hai na[:D]..afterall this is wat is called havin fun...
Keep goin!![:)]

Anonymous said...

Nice dream!!Un bandiyon ke dress ke description se laga you are gonna shoot a question ( some brainteaser).

As for the story abt ur friends did it really happen?

Neon

Anonymous said...

Nice dream!!Un bandiyon ke dress ke description se laga you are gonna shoot a question ( some brainteaser).

As for the story abt ur friends did it really happen?

Neon

Anonymous said...

Nice dream!!Un bandiyon ke dress ke description se laga you are gonna shoot a question ( some brainteaser).

As for the story abt ur friends did it really happen?

Neon

Voice said...

@phoenix
mujhe bhi yeh jan ke khushi hui kisi aur ko weird dreams ate hai meri tarah :P

@neon
what kind of brainteaser:P. yet it was weird to see bench full of girls wearing bright yello , bright red, blue etc (i cant say about the colors... dreams..)
yes it was a real incident.

thnx again phoenix,neon and nimesh for reading and more important for writing ur comments

Ankur said...

Dude.. it could be the best from your part if you had stay out of the mess. Its a saying in Hindi " doosre ke falte main kabhi tang nahi dalni chaiye" No matter how good friends they were/are to you, but the pact was with in them.
Anyways I dont know what to comment,Sorry if I went harsh.
Do write more n more n more.. I love reading your stuffs.

Sher-e-Punjab said...

hmm...wierd dream....nice...but wierd!!! [:P]

aur beta....kyu free ka panga le liya...ab na idhar ke rahe na udhar ke [:P]

btw, bade ajeeb bet lagate hai yaar tumhare dost....[:o]

anyways....nice presentation...pad ke maza aata hai...likhto raho !!! [:)]

Manoj Chitlangia said...

Hello Voice,
Had to read the A B n K thing twice to get the morale... A fine attempt I would like you to make it bit more lucid for the readers.
Well, the message you wish to convey is indeed divine, in this material world the fallible humans tend to get carried away by mere glimpse of material profits and so were A B and K.
I liked that idea of challenging yourself to achieve something, but just hope the intention is more real and path free from dirt.
That's All for now.

Captain Jack Sparrow said...

mat likh, plz mat likh.
he he.
mazaak kar raha tha.

Captain Jack Sparrow said...

Well I'm waiting for ur next dream, and it better be a better one. 11

Kritik4u aka sandy said...

Captain Sparrow tere par kaat doonga... I heard you also had a blogspot.. Lead me to it and I will write some pinching scathing comments :P

Kritik4u said...

When is the next one coming out .. Jaldi kar my creative comments dont wait for noone :D

Avinash singh said...

i never ran away, u cant blame us publicly for something that we dont do.. btw dreams r generaly weird... especially urs..

.."B found this interesting and agreed to do so." kamina B..hehe.

and the reason they were mad at u..(i think so)..that the most recent act u did with each was to betray them ..and its human nature to forget all gud things u did for them and remember all the bad things that has been done to them..

and truthfully u have expressed the events in a very beautiful manner explaining many small points with so much ease.. like A and K signing the bond and giving so much credit to its existence..

but this event describes the pleasures u extract from sheer intelligence and achieving the challenges.. and that is a real good trait.. it will propel u forward.. and with gud and intelligent company around u .. u will always be happy..

good idea to jot down ur dreams in the blog section.. but 1 request, wen u do so.. also write down wat inferences and amusements u can draw out from ur dream..it will make it a more interesting read..

Voice said...

U never never ranaway but sometimes u were also fed up. and would have surely started running after that.

First thnks for dropping bye and OMG.. wat a comment. I agree with the reason. They forgot immediately that i was the one who gave them the papers on the first hand:P. Anyway no complaints... that part was expected

yups blogging my dreams here is a good idea but aajkal sapne kaam aa rahe hai. hota hai beech beech me aisa bhi hota hai.

Anonymous said...

Hey Voice,
It was a real good feeling I had....Its not only about some text that I went thru...but somethin more...
I dont know you in person, but I can get some of you in your writin...if that is the goal you aimed at, then my frend u r successful....:))
Seems stories and dreams are true the way u have placed them in...
Good man...keep it up....Im not @all bored by ur stuffs...rather enjoyed readin.....
But at the same time I will expect some maturity in your writing next time which I feel u lack this time....hope I can count on an "ubharta" writer....
What else???? Wil wait for ur next blog....
.Hasi

Avinash singh said...

u have performed above my expectations in the tests which i forced u to take while i was doing that "love stunt".. i may at times cannot understand wat u r tryin to say but i will try my level best for .. never running away... not for any reason but for the fact that i love to hear any word u utter ..

and 1 thing is i am sure of that my level best tries are too high :))

diana said...

de dream was capturin than the real one..but it was fun readin the doer one as well..n u last para was soo convincin and if i was either A or K...i wuf ve jus given u a hug!...